20.109 | Fall 2007 | Undergraduate

Laboratory Fundamentals in Biological Engineering

Assignments

Guidelines for Writing a Lab Report

A formal lab report is the principle way scientific data are conveyed to the rest of the scientific community and preserved for future examination. Each scientific journal has its own idiosyncrasies regarding particulars of the format, but the most common elements of a scientific report, in order of presentation, are:

  • Title
  • List of Authors
  • Abstract
  • Introduction
  • Materials and Methods
  • Results, including figures and tables
  • Discussion
  • References

The requirements for each section are outlined below. This information is given in the order that you might actually write your report rather than the order in which the parts are presented in the final report. If you want more information, you can find parts of this text in an on-line collection of instructional materials used in the Purdue University Writing Lab. Other parts are inspired by Robert A. Day’s book, How to Write and Publish a Scientific Paper from Oryx Press, a copy of which is available in the teaching lab.

Authors

This is often the subject of many heated discussions and hurt feelings when only one report can be submitted to describe many people work. Since each of you will submit your own report, questions about who the authors will be, in what order, and what responsibilities each will have are moot. However you should list the name of your partner on your report since she contributed to the work.

Figures and Tables

Some readers begin by scanning the figures first. The figures, with the legends, should provide a self-explanatory overview of your data. Decide what the data show, then create figures which highlight the most important points of your paper.

Tables are used to present repetitive data that is numerical. Graphs or illustrations, collectively called figures, are used to present numerical trends, raw data (like a picture of a gel), or a model that explains your work.

When you prepare your figures and tables, keep in mind that it is significantly more expensive for journals to publish figures and tables than text, so try to present the data in a way that is worthy of such added expense. The table below is an example of an ineffective table.

TEMPERATURE REPEATS CORTICAL CELLS ION FLOW
24°C 5 + -
24°C 5 - +

The information in Table 1 could be presented in one sentence, such as: “In ten experiments carried out at 24°C, ion flow was detected only in the presence of cortical cells.” This is a clearer and more concise way to present the information. In addition, all tables and figures must have numbers, titles and legends.

Figure and Table Legends

Legends to the figures and tables explain the elements that appear in the illustration. Conclusions about the data are NOT included in the legends. As you write your first draft, state in a short simple sentence, what the point of the figure or table is. In later drafts, make sure each element of the figure or table is explained. Your figure legends should be written in the present tense since you are explaining elements that still exist at the time that you are writing the paper.

Results

To write the results section, use the figures and tables as a guide. Start by outlining, in point form, what you found, going slowly through each part of the figures. Then take the points and group them into paragraphs, and finally order the points within each paragraph. Present the data as fully as possible, including stuff that at the moment does not quite make sense.

Verbs in the results section are usually in the past tense. Only established scientific knowledge is written about in the present tense, “the world is round,” for example. You cannot presume that your own data are part of the body of established scientific knowledge, and so when you describe your own results, use the past tense, “a band of 1.3 KB was seen,” for example. There are, however, exceptions to this general rule. It is acceptable to say, “Table 3 shows the sizes of the DNA fragments in our preparation.” It is also acceptable to say, “In a 1991 paper, Ebright and coworkers used PCR to mutagenize DNA.”

Materials and Methods

This is like a cooking recipe. Include enough detail so that someone can repeat the experiment. It is important that the reader be able to interpret the results knowing the context in which they were obtained.

The Materials and Methods section should be written in the past tense, since your experiments are completed at the time you are writing your paper.

Discussion

This is the section of the paper for you to show off your understanding of the data. You should summarize what you found. Explain how this relates to what others have found. Explain the implications.

Introduction

Introduce what your question is. Explain why someone should find this interesting. Summarize what is currently known about the question. Introduce a little of what you found and how you found it. You should explain any ideas or techniques that are necessary for someone to understand your results section.

Abstract

The abstract is a very short summary (usually around 150-250 words) of what the question is, what you found, and why it may be important.

The importance of abstracts is increasing as more scientists are using computers to keep up with the literature. Since computers can only search for words in a paper’s title and abstract, these may be the only parts that many people read. The abstract may also be the way a journal’s editor decides whether to send your paper out for peer review or reject it as uninteresting and not generally relevant. Consequently, a well written abstract is extraordinarily important.

Title

The title should be short (about 10 words), interesting, and it should describe what you found.

References

Include only those references that pertain to the question at hand. Journals vary considerably in their preferred format for the reference list. For this class, you should list the references alphabetically by the first author’s last name. Include all the authors, the paper’s title, the name of the journal in which it was published, its year of publication, the volume number, and page numbers. Please carefully follow the punctuation and format requirements. A typical reference should look like

Pavletich N. P., C. O. Pabo. “Zinc Finger-DNA Recognition: Crystal Structure of a Zif268-DNA Complex at 2.1 A.” Science 252 (1991):809-817.

In the body of your report, this article would be cited as follows: “The crystal structure of the Zif268-DNA complex has been solved (Pavletich 1991).”

If two or more articles can be cited for this finding, then they are listed alphabetically, separated by a comma.

Evaluation

Content

SECTION GOAL EVALUATION
Title To give content information to reader Engaging Appropriate Not enough content information or too much
Abstract To concisely summarize the experimental question, general methods, major findings, and implications of the experiments in relation to what is known or expected

Key information is presented completely and in a clear, concise way

All information is correct

Organization is logical

Captures any reader’s interest

Sufficient information is presented in proper format

Would benefit from some reorganization

Understandable with some prior knowledge of experiment

Some key information is omitted or tangential information is included

Some information is misrepresented

Some implications are omitted

Incorrect format is used

Introduction To identify central experimental questions, and appropriate background information. To present a plausible hypothesis and a means of testing it

Relevant background information is presented in balanced, engaging way

Your experimental goals and predictions are clear and seem a logical extension of existing knowledge

Writing is easy to read

All background information is correctly referenced

Relevant background information is presented but could benefit from reorganization

Your experiment is well described and a plausible hypothesis is given

With some effort, reader can connect your experiments to background information

Writing is understandable

Background information is correctly referenced

Background information is too general, too specific, missing and/or misrepresented

Experimental question is incorrectly or not identified

No plausible hypothesis is given

Writing style is not clear, correct or concise

References are not given or properly formatted

Materials and methods To describe procedures correctly, clearly, and succinctly. Included a correctly formatted citation of the lab manual

Sufficient for another researcher to repeat your experiment

Lab manual cited

Procedures could be pieced together with some effort

Lab manual cited

Procedures incorrectly or unclearly described or omitted

Lab manual not cited

Results To present your data using text AND figures/tables

Text tells story of your major findings in logical and engaging way

Figures and tables are formatted for maximum clarity and ease of interpretation

All figures and tables have numbers, titles and legends that are easy for the reader to follow

Text presents data but could benefit from reorganization or editing to make story easier for reader

Text includes interpretation of results that is better suited for discussion section

Figures and tables are formatted to be clear and interpretable

All figures and tables have numbers, titles and legends

Text omits key findings, inaccurately describes data, or includes irrelevant information

Text difficult to read due to style or mechanics of writing

Text difficult to read due to logic or organization

Figures and tables missing information, improperly formatted or poorly designed

Figures and tables have inadequate or missing titles or legends

Discussion To evaluate meaning and importance of major findings

Appropriate conclusions drawn from findings

Connections made between experimental findings

Connections made between findings and background information

Future directions considered

Writing is compelling

Appropriate conclusions drawn from findings

Experimental limitations considered

Writing is clear

Conclusions omitted, incorrectly drawn or not related to hypothesis

Relationship between experimental findings and background information is missing or incorrectly drawn

Writing style and mechanics make argument difficult to follow

References To give credit work on which your own is based

Complete list of reliable sources, including peer-reviewed journal article(s)

Properly formatted in body of report and in reference section

Adequate list or reliable sources

With minor exceptions, properly formatted in body of report and in reference section

List is incomplete or includes sources not cited in body of report

List includes inappropriate sources

List not properly formatted

References not properly cited in body of report

Style

WRITING STYLE AND MECHANICS EVALUATION
Voice

Appropriate for audience

Consistent passive or active voice

Too simple or too advanced

Irregular use of passive and active voice

Word choice

Concise

Says what you mean

Scientific vocabulary used correctly

Verbose

Ambiguous or incorrect

Scientific vocabulary misused

Fluency

Sentences and paragraphs well structured

Punctuation correct or only minor errors

Grammar correct or minor errors

Spelling correct

Sentences repetitive or awkward

Paragraphs not logical

Periods, commas, colons and semicolons misused

Significant number of run-on sentences, sentence fragments, misplaced modifiers, subject/verb disagreements

Significant number of spelling errors

Scientific format

Past tense for describing new findings

Present tense used for accepted scientific knowledge and figure legends

All sections included and properly formatted

Misleading verb tenses

Some sections missing

Abstract not single spaced

Figures missing legends

References not properly formatted

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